Brown and Gold, J.A.M.Whistler
His paint-pot, its crude oil
flung on golden skin
(that topped the dark garb
of elegance
fronting mid-brown grounds).
So, once, said Ruskin.
He had a big mahogany table to work
and prep his palette, tone by jigsaw tone.
He used a house-brush called Matthew
to sweep restraint out, onto taut canvas.
Long-handled brushes, that kept him a distance,
like cigarette-holders
fully loaded, brightening by the hour.
His interiors caught a four a.m. In the soul
a dark dawn that struggled to stay unlit,
for the quietened night of us to sleep as is
refusing the move to morning.
A reluctance in the walls, in some vague house.
The days progress sharpened by his fog.
Nothing casual for the eye that wants to see

this is rich. especially enjoy the clarity you create with such words as vague and fog and “nothing casual for the eye that wants to see” so strong.
His interiors caught a four a.m. In the soul
a dark dawn that struggled to stay unlit
ha i really like how you describe that dark tea time of the soul there…nice capture of character in this…
I really enjoyed this! Loved the “Long-handled brushes, that kept him distance, like cigarette-holders fully loaded, brightening by the hour” and “a dark dawn that struggled to stay unlit” Wonderful poem.
Fantastic! Original and unique. Absolutely adore the subject and the language you’ve chosen to voice the piece is PERFECT. Love this!
Such a wonderful portrait (as it were) of Whistler but any painter – your words give specific details so beautifully, and then the wonderful patina. k.
so many layers to this, ominous undertones, fabulous imagery. the eye that wants to see, indeed.
I love Whistler’s works. I’ve never seen the Peacock Room but when I go to DC I’m going to. Just watched the Lily Langtry series. If he was truthfully portrayed in it, I think I’d have fallen for him head over lampshade, for sure! Loved this poem – it catches his American in London expansiveness!
PS – I love your voice. It was so great to hear it on the “bell” recording. Awesome!!
I enjoyed this, excellent. Whistler is one of my favourite artists.
His paint-pot, its crude oil
flung on golden skin
I love this
Nothing casual indeed. We often find ourselves reluctant to move with the day when caught in a ‘writing-haze.’ :grins: