We Sleep-walked in Cemeteries of Neglect


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We sleep-walked
in cemeteries of neglect,
where soot was the common factor
binding us to buildings
slumped
to their knees
by the imposition
of successive fogs,
where industrial chimneys
spewed
dirty profit daily
down our throats,
and anytime,
for a reminder,
you could look up
to see who the city’s God was,
and watch the rusting skeletal hull
of the gasometer seep through the smog:
a tombstone awaiting names.

6 Comments

  1. brian miller says:

    dang man….love the opening few lines…then you really get into the grit…also th looking up to know who the city’s god was…makes me think of a few places i had been…some cities it is the sky scrapers where they sit looking back…

    1. Brian Carlin says:

      Cheers , Brian! The bloody gasometer has been looming over me for the past wee while and I’m afraid I’ll keep writing of It till its oot me system đŸ™‚

  2. Where chimneys spewed dirty profit down our throats. Great lines in there, a poignant piece.

    1. Brian Carlin says:

      Thanks for that V. The childhood conglomeration of soot and stoor seems to be where a lot of my stuff has been coming from the past few months.

  3. marousia says:

    The opening lines are stunning – I really enjoyed the simple yet vivid imagery

  4. ManicDdaily says:

    Yes = vivid. Feels terrible prophetic. Currently descriptive too. Well done. k.

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