(view from Castel Sant’Angelo after the thunderstorm)
Thunder boomed outside,
cannoning the mausoleum
we were interred in.
Slogging up its spiral
walkway, covered with
solid stone as the bangs sounded out.
Surrounded.
We opened onto
a small courtyard
where gutters spewed
out eager fountains.
And the footways swam.
Then we sat, sheltered,
as the lightning flashed,
viewed through ancient arches
and you told me,
eyes down and closed-in,
how vertigo goes,
and I tried to empathise,
whilst drinking in the beautiful downpour,
as the city submerged.
Really vivid descriptions, Brian – you transported me right there.
sounds about like the thunderstorm i was caught in at charlottesville….it was like someone just dropped a lake on us in seconds…..
Great imagery.
And digging the closing lines.
Submerged, not too deep I trust;
It’s harder to appreciate vertigo when the bliss is spinning faster…
Wet, wet city! Truly looks like a beautiful place to spend a day in the rain. I feel as though I have. An enjoyable read….
nice job with this! I really found myself in the midst of it all 🙂
nice..particularly liked how your absorption of the views of a drowning city kept you from fully appreciating the suffering of vertigo of your companion