Ahab


A harpoon, slung.

A fully extended arm

wrenched, wrung.

 

A torn muscle ripped.

(ripple)

blood flood.

 

Blubber and bible thumper,

rubber, wood and rust.

trajectory

 

arc–segment–chord

 

Thought and deed

carry my future.

Religion maddened by nature.

 

I am his downfall.

I am him.

Blowhole cry

ignites the icy sky.

4 Comments

  1. This one is like thunder, Brian. It seems fitting

  2. Hi Brian…I was stunned when I first read the tactile- ness in this (and I read it over many times and again this morning) The language is so spare, weighed letter by letter, compressed, almost like a manual or a documentary commentary. and the last stanza….

  3. Brian Carlin says:

    I like you like, Jana. This had been slooshing around for six years, before I got the life belt out and rescued it yesterday. I dragged it in, wrung it out and dried it by the fire. It reminds me why I throw very little away, when the mind-space comes and fits everything has its time.

  4. Susan Scott says:

    Extraordinary prose Brian thank you – I recently re-read Edinger’s Moby Dick, an American Nekyia, which brought out your themes. You managed to do this in a few words.

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