Small Animal Star


I am a
small animal
Star.

I am firewood,
For billions of years,
temporarily blazing,

I eat air.

Give light to the distant,
burn those
who venture near.

I have a magnificence:
in the local heaven of humanity.

My name means something.

Those who don’t know me
call me OGLE-TR-122b.

I am lonely for the multitudes
to experience my warmth.

I am lost in the shape
of the vastness of everything.

And I burn my little way.

When felt,
I feel
truly seen.

I am blind to my own fire.

12 Comments

  1. Lots of wonderful images burning bright.

    I am blind to my own fire./I am firewood,/For billions of years,/temporarily blazing, – some favourite lines.

    Great work here.

    1. Brian Carlin says:

      Trying to simplify, capture some child-like wonder… And the nature of being just a speck with consciousness … Glad you liked .

  2. seingraham says:

    This feels both wondrous, and lonely – to me – at the same time … a bit of a miracle. Cool poem.

    1. Brian Carlin says:

      Then my work here is done S.

  3. kez says:

    cool and the feeling of wonder is certainly conveyed …lovely ..thank you x

  4. Karen says:

    One to ponder, mysterious and powerful.

  5. LifeInVerse says:

    I was unaware that a star could be captured into words.
    Beautiful, masterful artistry is shown here!
    I love these images and feelings.

  6. ZQ says:

    “Beam me up Scotty” 🙂

  7. Jennifaye says:

    I love this : “I am lost in the shape of the vastness of everything.” So Zen.

  8. Yes! Lovely!
    You can find my Rally 4 Poets entry at:

    I STAND POISED TO OPEN

    I’d like to share another one with you, too, though, since the theme is related to your poem here:

    I LIVE IN A DISTANT GALAXY ALL BY MYSELF

    Oh, and just a thought on your referring to yourself as a “redundant poet” in your profile-”Self-plagiarism is style.” (Alfred Hitchcock).

  9. j.h. white says:

    One spare and gleaming gem leads to another…
    Jana

    1. Brian Carlin says:

      Thanks for the comment on one of my own favourites, Jana. 🙂

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